Writing



These two terms I felt like I have improved in my writing from last year. I have improved in all areas including Narritives, short stories, adventure stories and also improved on my editing, planning and also spelling for my stories that I have written. One thing that has helped me improve this year is that if I set out a good plan it helps me write a better story then just with a nromal plan. Also after I have wrote my story, I make it better by editing it with my new editing skills that I have learnt this year. I am also still learning better ways of having a better plan which I said before helps me alot with my stories.

Portal Story: This is definately one of my better stories I have wrote so far. I put alot of effort into this story and used discriptive words and made my story more exciting by adding in those (desriptive) words.

Soldier Letter: My soldier letter was a fairly good story I would think. I think that the way I wrote it was the thing that made it one of my better stories this year. I used the planning time well to figure out what I was going to write in this story.

PLANMAN: PLanman helped me alot so far this year, as I was having some minor problems with my planning earlier this year. I used the (PLANMAN) to help me set out parts of the story. Which when I could do that easier and quicker it gave me more time to come up with good ideas for my story.

Adventure Story (ANDY GRIFFITHS): This was an okay story, I didn't use my planning time effectly as in didn't have a very good plan. I still produced a fairly good story but it could of been better. If I had of learnt about the smart way of planning.